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Decrepit Remains

Tue Jun 27, 2006, 7:07 AM
I cast down your decrepit remains
bury them for nature's gain
Haunted eyes gaze after me
But I cannot set you free.

You sing a song below a hum
Accompanied by the death drum
Smells of earth and cold-damp-dark
In your eyes go out the spark

I say my hesitant "Goodbye"
Know that you'll never see me cry
and as I turn to walk away,
I see your fingers reach out the grave.


I saw NIN Sunday night. They were fucking awesome, of course. I don't know where they get the energy to tour for a year and a half and still have such an amazing stage presence.

In other news, I'm 18 now!

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:iconirishhellgirl:
post this

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Castro is alive? O.o
:iconretched-misdemeanor:
Oh, okay. ^^ Didn't know it was post-worthy.

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"The reward to those who enter the citadel of the soul is TRANSFIGURATION- the radiance which pours through a rapidly changing personality." ~Alice A. Bailey
:iconirishhellgirl:
duh!! most thhings you should post.. the ppl can help, and tell u how to improve it
:hug:

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Castro is alive? O.o
:iconvidio:
"In other news, I'm 18 now!!"... happy birthday^^
I think that, Decrepit Remains is so sadly, and i love it...
I 'm italian, i don't know the word to write all that i think and it's horrible, but i can read the english so much better ^^ and i thing you are a good Poet...
:iconretched-misdemeanor:
Thanks for the happy birthday... 'twas just that (seeing as how my present was 2 NIN tickets <3).

Glad you liked the poem... it was fun to write. It was one of those that just flowed out perfectly, rhymes and all.

You'll get the hang of it, don't worry. Or you could use those translator-things (although I'm not certain of their reliability).

OoooOOOoo, an Italian boy! >< Sorry, couldn't help myself...

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"The reward to those who enter the citadel of the soul is TRANSFIGURATION- the radiance which pours through a rapidly changing personality." ~Alice A. Bailey
:iconretched-misdemeanor:
Gods, I am such an idiot... I say things without thinking at times. And always to someone I actually want to get to know.

I am sorry if I offended you in any way.

I had been on the computer for a week straight (under such conditions, one can forget how to properly communicate), it seems, which is why I haven't been on much for the last two weeks.

Hope to talk to you soon! <3

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"The reward to those who enter the citadel of the soul is TRANSFIGURATION- the radiance which pours through a rapidly changing personality." ~Alice A. Bailey
:iconvidio:
Hey, don't worry... it's all ok^^
I'm not offended, i can understand your position!
I hope that i have write all that i thing right...

See you Soon!! Kiss

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